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kelleyana ( F P C D ) at 2009-06-05

I like these romantic expressive words of your's :"Kissing in the rain
Sensual lips lashes together
Full of lust that no one can explain". It poured out feeling of passion and lust. I think you are a great poet, but again i find it need a bit of polishing, also it's too repititive. Well done, kel.

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