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Kira ( F P C D ) at 2009-02-23

I think it's just sweet how you portray this relationship of yours.Kindda seems to me that the world seems to be revolving around the both of you instead of the opposite.I can feel the craziness of how you both felt for each other. The way you end it is just a beautiful way to sum it all.

Excellent Job
5/5

Valedico ( F P C D ) at 2009-02-23

This is a lovely poem, it's filled with such beautiful imagery. It brought a smile to my face, well done skittlessss :]

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