My Mistakes ( P C )
at 2009-03-03
Good poem, I enjoyed it. but maby you shouldnt try so ard to make them rhyme. Sometimes poems are better if they are more feelings and less restricted.
XxSHATTEREDxX ( F P C D )
at 2009-03-03
Amazing poem!
Loved every word.
great flow, well written 5/5
xoxox
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