Deana ( F P C D )
at 2009-03-25
This is really beautiful, soft and romantic, I wonder how long is an eternity? a wonderful write as always.
Stormy ( F C D )
at 2009-04-13
Such beauty in these words.
These lines..
'violins and harps doeth play
within the very core of thee'
are indeed most awesome.
An excellent read.
shenoa ( F P C )
at 2009-04-22
This is such a deep poem, i read it twice. i dont usually do that. but i like your use of words, enlightening. good job.
Stormy ( F C D )
at 2009-05-30
Man, I swear...you are a wordsmith, no doubt. I truly love reading your work...wow, this is so good. I;m not able to get on as much as I could, but when I do log in, I look for a new one by you. You speak volumes, you say so much just in a few lines.
Peace and Love,
Terry
dreamofolwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-12
What a beautiful poem! I love it. I'm not only saying this... but yesterday I was attempting to write a "Love poem" with music/violins" in it, and gave up :( ... And I read this today! It is truely an AWESOME write, that just blew me away.... Totally.
P.S I love the olden day writng in it ..."doeth, thee" etc, it's just the finishing touch to it, and make's it so romantic! Aahh...... :)
Demonic Inferno ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-18
That was beautifully brilliant the flow was flawless was delicate great choice of words that filled it with imagery and emotion awesome job
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