Mr Anonymous ( F P C )
at 2009-03-30
When I first saw the title, I was really really curious as to how apples are like love. I totally get that now! That was really well done, and again, I really enjoyed your rhyming, Keep it up!
RedRose ( C )
at 2009-04-02
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.....10/10..wait 100/100.....so deep, great stanza, beautifully created-breath taking meaning....LOVE IT...
Nowhere Man ( F P C )
at 2009-07-12
"A bitter bite from the apple of your eye.
Then a teary gaze followed by a sigh.
That final breath will condemn you to hate.
For that is the reason it's true love we wait." - I really love these lines... You're an awesome writer... my hands down =) 5/5
Dave ( F C D )
at 2009-09-15
This was a piece that I read, and then re-read. There are several underlying themes and references here. The more I read it the more I took away from it. A strong indication of a not only a very intelligient young lady but of a wonderfully creative and thoughtful writer. Well done! Dave.
Linda Leavers ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-05
Very, very good Mandy! I loved this. A good metaphorical poem. I have a quote just like this, sorta. But also, I really liked how you were abled to rhyme every two lines and not every other line. It's a bold attempt and you did it well. 5/5
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