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Stormy ( F C D ) at 2009-05-30

This is such a good poem Ann.
The last stanza is heartwarming.

Directly Implied ( F C D ) at 2009-07-30

You definitely got each word perfect. The nights are tough and the days can be brutal as we carry on as if nothing is wrong
I'm glad I ran across this poem It's in my favorites now

lostlove1 ( F C D ) at 2009-11-19

I can not believe this has been up so long with only3 votes and 2 comments. I was pulled in automatically as my eyes just seem to find the sad ones..Although theres no mention of death it is plain to see that the one you are grieving is passed. But it was beautifully sad as the ending reminded us of the promises. I enjoyed this well writen piece.

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