Luanne ( F P C D )
at 2009-03-22
But, along the tear-soaked path
the key of hope,
That opens the door
To your infinite bliss.
Have been lost.
Upon the azure sky of tomorrow
Clouds of joy have become
pallid ghostly moans
^^^
Awww Illumi such sad lines ~wipes tear~
As you recall the memories of
~me~
For I have hidden
Within the vast wrinkles of my hands
A single drop of tear
^^^
The more I read the more touching they become.
Hunny there is so much emotion in this write. I can not help to wipe a tear for I hear the sadness in your words each day and your voice still lingers in my mind and breaks my heart to know you are feeling so much pain.
~hugs~ sweet friend
Side Effects ( F P C D )
at 2009-03-23
I liked this and I felt you had given this a lot of effort. I admitt to liking the first one better but all the same still a really good write and wroth 5/5
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