ForsakenBeautyXx ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-03
Wow. Its starts off as such a simplistic poem, and reaches to something farther. The ending is so sad though. =[
ashley
Girl Loves Guy ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-16
I really enjoyed this. Very powerful and emotional ending. Keep up the great work. Shanik
love drought melody ( F P C )
at 2009-05-07
Wow. this was deep. the wording was perfect, the emotions so put forth. it was truly a sad love story portrayed into a beautifully written poem.
--lovedroughtmelody
x3 I Want To Be His Bella x3 ( F P C D )
at 2009-06-26
Very sad, deep and emotional.
amazing
5/5
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