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Deana ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-09

And I am
a Poet of immortal love
trying to harvest those winged songs
into the basket of my heart
from within I pour verses
upon the empty white pages
after pages

I absolutely love this stanza, and yes for sure you are a poet of immortal love...your words are so divine, Like a kiss without ever touching...beautiful Alfred.

Tom Swart ( F P C ) at 2009-07-16

Wow what a nice work and a well placed grouping of words that have fallen into all the right places with just the best meaning. i really like this poem of yours. I liked the style as i think it is similar to mine. No boundaries and no senseless rhyming words just because they ryhme. you have some talent man. bravo!

Frank ( F C D ) at 2009-08-31

Your ability to decribe such things is superb. You really do have such talent.

Frank.

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