Deana ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-09
There really aren't words to describe the beauty in your verses, forget you...are you kidding I'm sure she never could! exquisite!
Nema ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-11
"And oh, forget not that sometime even Angels need a love filled hug"
- You don't know how much I loved this line..very good one for the ending stanze..great work !
I love the passion held in this poem, I usually don't read a lot of love poems here, but I really wanted to study the Ghazal more, your talks about it made me pretty interested.
I love the repetitive line you chose, it's not easy to repeat a line that would not bore the reader, nor the writer himself.
I just don't get why you capitalized the first letters of some words here, like Worldly Hopes, Evening Orchid and so..
Maybe I don't get the point??
and this one: Mercy-less...why haven't you written is normally.."merciless" ?
I think I need to re-read this poem..I really love it =)
Well done Alfred !
Illuminati RTVW ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-11
I capitalized all the words that are very important for me. They all have a deep meaning ~hugs~
soso ( F C D )
at 2009-04-13
I am repeating the same words whenever you post.
Another soulful masterful Ghazal poem from you, what kind of magic this is...
I read few written by others, still with no wonder you are the best when it comes to this form, Hafiz would envy!
Thanks for sharing your art and thoughts...
More than adorable.
Best wishes...
Olivia B
at 2009-04-16
Awesome
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