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Timothy ( F P C ) at 2009-04-15

Sometimes the short poems with a strong point are the best kind of peoms to write/read. Nice.

Melissa ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-17

Oh- this is so sad! I think we have all felt this way about someone. You described these feelings beautifully and honestly, can't ask for much more than that. I love the simplicity of this piece, very nice.

Thanks for sharing! :)

Randy Lee ( C ) at 2009-05-05

Always is a very long time....

Wake ( F P C ) at 2009-05-29

The endless race against the one you want to be with.
i love the broken-ness the simplicity of this poem delivers. Wow.

Short and Painful~


-Wake-

Harry Bryant ( F P C ) at 2009-10-27

Hi Stormy,

how did you know that is exactly how I feel about you. you are the best and always will be. you are in my heart to stay nice poem, says a mountain of words, an ocean of emotion, and a sky full of dreams. miss ya keep writing, Harry

william mae ( F C ) at 2009-11-19

A wonderful ans sad love poem, the heart is heavy when our loved ones are far away, I've always loved your poetry.

william mae ( F C ) at 2010-04-12

Perhaps I had forgotten what a wonderful poet you are, I don't see how I could have, because you are and I know it. I loved this piece Stormy

william mae ( F C ) at 2010-05-09

Time cannot erase love, time and love are not subject to each other I guess in any way, a beautiful write,

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