Mr Darcy ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-27
My Deraest 'Beth,
Your words show me your hearts journey. One that has travelled a winding and sometimes foreboding trail.
I ask myself why did she not simply turn back? Why carry on when the path ahead is so steep? Well my dear Beth, You perservered despite all of this because of faith. You believed in your hearts destiny and ths belief will see you through to your happy destination.
Weel done on this wonderful Sonnet. You have written so very well. I have written a few and have found them to be both challenging and rewarding.
Michael
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