Nema ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-28
I think I love your love poems..lol.
I love the shortness on the lines and the length of the poem in whole.
Although it sounded to me that you needed some stronger wording to this piece, you still did a good job :)
Well done Alfred!
Write on~
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-29
Short, sweet and meaningful. Nice job!