Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-01
Olwin,
I have come to absolutely adore your writes. You always seem to write what seems so very close to the tongue and wants to be said, and then to top it off it has a great rhyme pattern to it. It flows really well. Wonderful Job dear. Keep it up.
Take Care,
Kay
Sourav ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-02
Very free flowing and absolutely romantic. Depiction of the thoughts seems so natural and true. A very good write!
Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-02
Well done. Ditto to all the other comments. I think we may have all experienced these feelings about that one true love we have. Keep up the good work.
PinkyPrincess ( F C )
at 2009-07-02
Aw! This poem is beautiful! I love it! You've expressed such lovely feeling and I think a lot of people can relate to this experience... everyone wants to cuddle with the one they love and watch the moonlight and stars! It's the best thing ever. You write about this experience so nicely. Great job! :)
Chrissy
at 2009-07-03
This is reeally gewd :D
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-07
My type of poem written with simplicity no flowery words with good an excellent flow and simple meter, straight from the heart. An easy read and understandable, whoever it was written for will love this as you get your message across and it pulls heart-strings. 5/5 Ray S
Rafael Navarro ( P )
at 2009-07-07
Love this poem hits you pretty deep
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-09
Olwin
what a beautiful poem of love you penned.
Sweet moments here I cherish,
With no thought of self or time...
Just knowing every heartbeat,
That you take so close to mine.
These words brought back so many memories for me. Beautiful dear just beautiful
It fills me.. it completes me,
The love you've given me...
I never shall forget it,
Because it's become a part of me.
This is how a prue true love should feel :)
Excellent job!
~Hugs~
Cindy
Colm Ace of Trumps ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-09
This was really sweet, and made me happy to read it. The rhyme is good and the way you put ythe words together was really excellent, it was a very good write, probably the best that Ive read of yours to this point. Keep up the writing!
Colm
soso ( F C D )
at 2009-07-09
Sweet and romantic in a very simple manner.
Also nice title, Olwin...
How inspiring love can be!
Best wishes and take care.
TragicallyXxTorn ( P )
at 2009-09-12
Aweh, I really love this poem. It's very sweet. :]
In Darkness I Dwell
at 2009-09-30
I really enjoyed reading this poem. So much emotion was wrote into it
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