David McGowan ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-08
There first thing that went through my head was "Baby don't hurt me, dont hurt me no more" form the song titled What Is Love?
This is quite an exceptional piece. I can imagine reading this poem out in a poetry session. It engulfs you with its direction and description on the authors thoughts and feelings on love and then gently bringing the poem to the end upon speaking advice on what to do if you have/want love.
This is a good read 5/5.
dreamofolwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-05
Love... so hard to describe. But you did a good job here!... and given good advice. Well done.
Olwin.
groovydude ( F P C )
at 2009-08-05
Thank you, I appreciate your opinion. I am still getting used to talking about my work.
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