Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-28
At first I was puzzled at the title but after reading it makes sense. Your passion and desire, thoughts are blinding the angels. This is so very different from your others and I like it. I like the form, it flows well, has a story and is expressed vey well, the images your words portray are vivid. Trees whispering, emotions dancing. You have done an excellent job with this.
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-28
BEAUTIFUL. This was probably one of my favorites from you, and one of your best in my opinion. I could tell this came from your heart, each word written was amazing. Well done!
Directly Implied ( F C D )
at 2009-07-28
This was so different and new. Even though it was a love poem, it sizzled, and dazzled the mind.
The end was perfection. Again you have blown my mind with your talents.
Impressive
Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-28
Trees whisper;
"Your secret is no longer "
^^
This really added something magical to the whole poem, Melody:)
I think you did really well on this, very romantic and also a daring format for someone just starting!
It is nice to see you are doing so well.
Much love to you:)
*hugs*
5/5 Ingrid
ps: I hope the book was helpful:)
dreamofolwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-30
A wonderful poem ... so uniquely written and expressed. I loved the imagery used and how it ended...
Trees whisper
"Your secret is no longer"
Perfect :) Simply amazing!
Sourav ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-30
Very refreshing indeed. The ending is fantastic. I liked the style of your writing here. Very impressive!
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-07-30
Ahh..now this is something different yet
beautifully sensual. I can feel passion
whispering..excellent write!
Directly Implied ( F C D )
at 2009-07-30
I know I commented once on this poem. But I came back to tell you I think it was so original and beautiful. Your poems have a special feeling. Never stop writing
God Bless
Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-02
You are talented, Melody. Don't let anything discourage you, least of all this pathetic voting system on here;)
* super big hugs*
Ingrid
Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-03
You won!
You go, girl:)))
Very well deserved win, Melody:)
*hugs*
Ingrid
karan ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-03
Bravo... This poem is so different and unique... You have portrayed a picture of perfection... I like the way you started your poem and the end is just perfect... Keep up the great work...:) and Congrats for the win... God Bless You...
*stargazer*
at 2009-08-03
Wow that was really good i love the way you put it all in to words.
*stargazer*
at 2009-08-03
Wow that was really good i love the way you put it all in to words.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-04
Congrats! You won..a well deserved win
indeed :D
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-04
This is one masterpiece for sure. Very unique and so refreshing.
I appreciate the judging skill of people who nominated it.
Loved the way you potrayed everything.
Very rarely we find poems so perfect, right from the start till end.
Congrats on winning.
all the best and take care
Abortion Murders Children ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-05
Wow, this was truly a masterpiece and so different from other writes. This was seriously a flawless poem, and the passion portrayed blew me away. What stunning words you have woven together, created such love and beauty. I really enjoyed this piece, thank you for posting! You have immense talent, never let anyone tell you otherwise. Keep writing, always and forever...
Congrats on the win, you sure deserved it!
~MaryAnne
Fsams ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-06
Truely a masterpiece...it has got its own unique style :) One of the best poems I have ever read :) Congrats :)
tc
Fsams
groovydude ( F P C )
at 2009-08-22
Nice, I like how you told of your inner soul and the release of it to the skies
PinkyPrincess ( F C )
at 2009-11-02
Wow.... I'm speechless!
This poem is so beautiful and so amazing... I never would think of writing something like that. Congrats on the win hon, you really deserve it!
A POETRY COMMUNITY
POEMS