Directly Implied ( F C D )
at 2009-08-04
Worded in a touching , tender way. Powerful and intense in the love felt between two people. I think this was one of the best love poems I have ever read.
Impressive
dreamofolwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-05
A beautiful, beautiful write. Wonderfully written and expressed. Left me spellbound! I loved it Sourav. Great job!
Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-05
I agree with the other commenters. I wonderful love poem about love. Nice and tender, has a soft feeling to it. Good job.
Robert Kerry Gardiner ( F C )
at 2009-08-08
Sourav.
Beatiful poem, I loved the imagery and the emotions thrown into this poem. I thought that the flow and style was nice. great work
Kerry Gardiner
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-08
Sourav
What a beautiful passion filled piece you have penned.
Beyond any utmost expectation
More than my moony wishful dream
You love me;
The whispering sensation-
Inside the heart, spirit of love beams
They can't see;
the secrets of our hearts that others can't see where we hold our most tender feelins. This stanz says so many things. mostly I feel the special love that is always meant to be.
Deepness of your eyes
And the sweetness of your rosy lips -
Pure delight;
I can see love, where it lies
Feel the presence in my soul and its grip
In sleepless night;
Love so deep .sometimes thinking of it keeps us from sleep. The purest form.
Your voice most tender
Touches deep core of my heartstring
Like a song;
I'm lost in this splendour
Life flourishes like boundless sea, grows as spring
All along;
Everything is so much brighter when we have someone to share our lives with...your words are shining.
We love, in delight and beauty
Do not fear- denying life's every sly trick
In fun;
As two hearts hold a mystery
Whilst love's unveiling a spell of magic
To make them one.
So absolutly beautiful
Excellent job!
~Clapping~
Cindy
[ Praised by : Sourav ]
Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-09
Sourav,
The whispering sensation-
Inside the heart, spirit of love beams
They can't see;
^^
These words were the most profound ones to me. Indeed no one can see what makes two people love eachother and the secret chemistry that binds them.
It truly was a beautiful poem:)
Take care,
5/5 Ingrid
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