Comments

Maya ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-08

Beautiful poem, Liz:)

The repetitions gave it so much more strength and it had a mesmerizing effect on me....

I still believe in forever.
remembering every pact that was made
between hearts that believed in the impossible.
don't you see forever in our love?

I still believe forever
can only last with you.

^^
to let go of that thought is the biggest chaallenge of all...but if only one of the lovers involved believes and the other doesn't, then maybe it is time to close the door, so another one can be opened in time:)

Hope you are well, huniiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

Love, always xx

5/5 Ingrid

Dixiedaisy ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-13

Liz,
Such a beautiful poem. I usually tend to dislike most love poetry because it seems so run of the mill same ole same ole. However, yours was different and I absolutely loved it. Wonderful Job.
Take Care,
Kay

Nema ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-13

Glen-duuuuuh!!
It's been a LONG WHILE!!!
I missed your poems A LOT =) well done with this one..though I can't see any improvement. (Yeah you know my honesty*
I think I liked the one before this more.
But I understand how hard it was for you to write.

Write on~
Missed you so freaking much! <3