Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-09
In our hearts is where our true love resides forever and goes with us each step we travel during the days. The heart is where we should always make sure they are. Well done.
Faithless ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-09
Ingrid, I love how you penned this beautiful poem down. It painted such a beautiful picture in my mind.Your words are full of serenity. Though our love ones may be physically with us, they will forever stay in our hearts no matter where they are. You are always in my heart too my friend
Excellent Write
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-09
True love always remains in the heart and wherever we go we can feel that person with us; they always stay in our hearts and our love for them never stops growing. Nicely done
Abortion Murders Children ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-10
A beautifully penned piece Ingrid, the feeling was so real and alive, the love and passion you have glowed throughout this piece. This was a stunning write, and I like the format you did it in, it held my attention and painted such imagery and beauty in my mind. Keep it up!
5/5 from me, thanks for posting.
Take care and God bless you, Child of God!
~MaryAnne
Directly Implied ( F C D )
at 2009-08-10
An excellent write of a love that stays with you comforting the heart. Beautifully done uncomplicated just pure emotions
Valedico ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-12
See, I'm not a big fan of this kind of love poetry, but there's an exception rising in this particular piece. Whilst I don't think it's original, and what love poems are nowadays? I think it's simple and well communicated, you didn't digress from the narrative and kept it simple. A sweet poem/dedication from you.
'Whenever I feel lost or lonely,
'I only have to place my hand
upon my chest
to feel his presence
there. '
Such a lovely sentiment.
Good write, Ingrid. I liked the simple approach here.
[ Praised by : Ingrid de K ]
mandy ( F P C )
at 2009-08-12
"And as he dozes off, lulled
by the sound of my voice,
my love for him grows
with every second passing."
I really like that format you use!
This stanza here is absolutly beautiful. So soothing. Keep on writting!!!
mandy :)
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-13
A sense of security and warmth radiates
from this poem & it shows the peace love
can give in a relationship..a beautiful read :)
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-13
Ingrid fantastic in its touching simplicity there is some lucky angel out there ha! ha! Ray S 5/5
Could feel the warmth.
Mer Divinity ( F C D )
at 2009-08-14
That is so beautiful! :) I love this one. I'm going to favorite it! :) <33
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