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Travis ( F C ) at 2009-09-25

Really god poem, especially is english isnt your 1st language, keep it up

feel freecomment back!

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-30

I loved this. Everything seemed to fit together.
"Stay close ,
Stay affectionate ,
Let me always feel you
The best love is not with words
It's something that shows only in your eyes" < this was my fave stanza.
Flawless piece. Love is best left unspoken. Well written, 5/5. Em