Kuro ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-08
You have a really good way with words. for a 14 yr old you certainly do surprise me. ^_^
don't let your talent be overcome with corrupt with making good poetry. only write when you feel it is right. and i can feel it. this feels right.
good job
~Ben
Valerie Needs More Blood ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-09
Awww thx. :)
that means alot.
divine divinity ( F C D )
at 2009-09-12
Great poem, really well written, full of love and desire. One comment to make, if you spaced it out it a bit more, made it into verses it would have more impact, at the moment it feels very rushed and jumbled together.
LNP Loud N Proud
at 2009-09-15
I agree with divine divinity on the presentation of your poem but otherwise this poem is cute. Just the poem to read when you want to put a smile on somebody's face. I enjoyed it, gave me a warm-bubbly feeling :).
A Different Me
at 2009-10-22
I really enjoy your writing! Keep up the good work!
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