cory ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-10
This one made me smile too cause the symbolize in it makes sense.All those thing's described love pretty well imo. Loved it!! another 5/5
~xcoryx~
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-12
Unique creativeness, i love it. You are so right, no one know the secrets of love. We so much uses it, even abuse it, but it's meaning are not fully explore. Well done, 5/5, kel.
David Marshall ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-14
This one was very interesting. Ive never seen a poem talk about love in that fashion. its a clever way of showing how u see love and expressing its mysteriousness. Good write.
vintage darling ( C )
at 2009-09-17
This poem was really well written. Maybe some rhymes or two would have made it even more enjoyable. Explaining love was a really good idea. Nice job.
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