Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-11
A collab with 2 people is difficult but three is almost impossible but this is seamless and as it should be, can't really tell who wrote which lines. A love poem of memories of meeting the first love, nice. Well done to all of you.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-12
This is indeed a heartfelt write of love. Each
verse flowed smoothly & had nice images to
see..well done :)
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-12
Rob
We did it :) I know we were all worried how this would turn out with the 3 of us....Thank you so much for adding your magic touch to it. I couldn't have been blessed with 2 better friends to work with then you and Nitin. Thanks for everything :)
Love you
Cindy
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-12
Aww this was soo beautiful you three. :] You definatly did a great job with putting us in that moment and making us feel it as we read the poem. Crystal clear imagery, very beautifully written. Wonderfully done!
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-13
Honesty and simplicity is the key word in this poem. Loved the way it moves on and take you to the fairy land.
Writing a collab with two talented people is an opportunity i am sure many people on this site would be praying for. It surely was a great experience.
It surely was a great pleasure, thank you
all the best and take care
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-14
This is great, it brings back memories of high school days where we keeps on dreaming for that one to come our way. I like it very much and you three done a wonderful job. Well done, kel.
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-09-16
A very nice collab difficult with just two but with three it's a merging of talented minds.
well done
Paul anand singh ( F C )
at 2009-10-25
Our future is now written in staone
Alove that will last forever
Not even death will part us
As we spend eternity together.
Wow.What a finish to a masterpiece.A beautiful colab by three tallented minds.An enjoyable read.
Paul...
Skyfire ( F P C )
at 2009-10-29
"I now have reasons to live forever
With you by my side, I will.."
These were my favorite lines! So touching.
lostlove1 ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
There are many poems written about love but not to the degree or depth of the one you've written..each line portrayed a sense of the truest love and rarest form.excellent flow.5/5 ~lostlove1~
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2010-02-12
Simply beautiful, like most of or all of your poems, even if this was a collaboration a joy to read and wonderfully conceived and written.
I look forward to your poems, excellent as always 5/5 Ray S
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