Autumn Breeze ( F C )
at 2009-10-06
This was quite a lovely verse from you.
My heart stumbled upon words
following in silent solitude
longing for this moment to come true
among my misfortune
For some reason, I favoured this stanza, it really appealed to me. Please capitalise the small i in the last line of the forth stanza....it's the only little flaw in this beautiful verse.
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