Comments - Come Stay With Me...

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-13

Such uplifting words to say to the one you love, come stay with me. Excellent.

T e m p s ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-13

A poem I think many could relate to. Beautifully written--you spilled your heart out. Well done. (:

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-14

Olwin this poem is absoultly lovely.

Come stay with me, and be my love.
Please dry my silent tears, because...
Too long my heart, has been denied.
Too many days, I've sat and cried.

I think we all know these feelings of crying alone. This stanza just sets the start of this piece wonderfuly


For you to me, are everything.
Like flowers' bloom, in days of spring.
A starlit sky, when I'm alone.
A place my heart, can call a home..

It is so hard to find a place for you to call a home for your heart. and the fact that you did is awesome. They joy you feel when you find that place can't be matched.

You've took my hand, and walked a while.
You've cheered my heart, and made me smile.
You've shown me love, I'd never known,
Friendship, care, that now has grown.

The best place for a love to bloom is from a friendship.

Come stay with me, and be my love.
I need you now, want you because.
Forever captured, is my heart,
You won it from, the very start.

Loved the ending Olwin...what a beautiful poem.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy
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End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-14

What to say...it just takes you back to those lovely days of romance...lala world :)
Very beautifully written dear, true love is what we look for.

Great write

all the best and take care

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-16

This is love, the one who makes our day
bright and fills our life with smiles. I liked the
flow & the simplicity of this write...lovely!

Tabitha ( C D ) at 2009-09-19

ILOVEd iT !! WEll dONE :)

NEVER REGRAT ANYTHING THAT MAKES at 2009-09-19

That was a good one, i like that keep it up

PinkyPrincess ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-19

Beautiful!!! I love poems about love and you did a wonderful job with this one!

Pain Redefined ( F C ) at 2009-09-20

Wow, that was beautiful all the way through. love the flow and rhyming was spot on. Really nice poem 5/5

Jackie ( F C ) at 2009-09-28

A truly beautiful poem. Written with such love and emotion.
For you to me, are everything.
Like flowers' bloom, in days of spring.
A starlit sky, when I'm alone.
A place my heart, can call a home

Excellent!!!!! 5/5

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-29

A very beautiful piece, brought tears to my eyes.
"For you to me, are everything.
Like flowers' bloom, in days of spring.
A starlit sky, when I'm alone.
A place my heart, can call a home.." < I loved this stanza. 5/5, Em

Kuro ( F P C D ) at 2010-04-06

Every stanza spoke a little part of me. i really enjoyed this Olwin. i think im going to favorite this :D