Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-16
Aw Frank, you are such a great storyteller!
I could picture this verse in a book with beautiful golden caps and little drawings on the side, you know, like those big books the monks used to make by hand in medieval times:)
I loved this story because it had such a happy ending and it was written really well!
As they met in the garden, they kissed for a while
The minstrel was struck, by her beauty and smile
Their tale a real miracle, that had come from above
The minstrel and maiden, had fallen in love
^^
Fav stanza, I so love the kissing part!
*hugs*
5/5 Ingrid
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-16
Frank
What a wonderful story of love
As they met in the garden, they kissed for a while
The minstrel was struck, by her beauty and smile
Their tale a real miracle, that had come from above
The minstrel and maiden, had fallen in love
The imagery and rhyme in this piece are awesome. I just love the way this sad tale turned to happiness. Love can heal all.
Excellent Job!
Take Care
Cindy
Emma Wallis ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-16
Frank, I love reading you stories/poems. They are always a joy to read and bring a smile to my face. I love how the sadness turned to happiness. Wonderful, 5/5. Em x
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-17
Frank you old romantic you, love this poem reminds me of the Highwayman, The Lady of the Lake etc. I will added it to my favourites and give it my last weekly comp vote as well as the Excellent 5/5 Ray S
AweingAshes
at 2009-09-22
I really liked this poem. Awesome rhymes and just such a beautiful flow. Agree with Ray S... it does kinda remind me of Highwayman. Loved that and this as well. :)
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