Blissful ( F C D )
at 2009-09-17
Beautiful! So good to see you writing again. :] I could just feel the love seeping through your words and it made me feel exactly what you were feeling when you wrote it. I'm not going to pick it apart and analyze it. Just a flawless love poem. <3
Yay! Write more!
*5/5*
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-17
Keith Urban! I absolutely love his song, so gorgeous. I can only imagine this poem was inspired by his awesome song. :]
Loved the format of this write. I loved the idea of using one line from each of the stanzas to construct the last stanza...it all went together quite well and beautifully. This poem is absolutely gorgeous and flowing with words of love. This poem is clearly from your heart and it shows. (: Nicely done.
Rachel RTVW ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-17
A very heartfelt poem. I was thinking at the end oh is this a form because of the repetition in the last stanza......very creative. I love the word choice and that the topic is relatable for those of us who have found our true love. Nice job!
MaSkEdSoUl ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-18
Oh wow, excellent poem. You can feel the love through every line, every word. Great wording and very soothing to read. I loved how in the last stanza you use one line from the other stanza's, didnt notice it till I read it like twice lol. Anyways good job!
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-18
Love is it not wonderful everything like the strum of a guitar or the hum of a moth reminds you how lucky you are even at my age ha! ha!
I am enchanted by your poem and when I read something so romantic I get jealous wishing I had thought of the words to quote to my best friend and wife this is such a poem. You know your art as it is perfect and excellent 5/5 Ray S
NEVER REGRAT ANYTHING THAT MAKES
at 2009-09-21
HMM I LIKE THIS. VERY LOVING AND VERY ROMANTIC. UR LIPS ARE ALL FULL WITH LOVE AND I THINK U ARE IN LOVE.
KEEP WRITING FOR EVERYONE TO COME AND REALIZE THAT , LOVE DO EXIST .
Erin
at 2009-09-21
Wow! I'm speechless. Your poem is just so .. erm ... romantic? Its fulfill of love! When I read your poem somehow I feel so in love haha! I think other poets had explained very well how great your poem is! And yes as they said your last stanza is amazing! I'm so impressed by your way of writing your poem. Very good and nice poem!
5/5
Chelsey ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-23
You called me a cheater?? I believe your title was musically inspired by Keith Urban hmm??? lol
Ok so you were right about the whole writers are their worst critiques!...because I liked this a lot!!
Im not used to reading poems like these..shoot the last time I read a poem it was all rhyming and the typical stuff people seem to hate..but I loved this! The words, the repeated line in the first and last stanzas..it was really sweet!
Im glad you got over your writers block..you shouldn't have writers block with the love you and Jason have. Your emotions need to come out in pen more often because as much as I hear about him, there is so many good poems inside of you that I don't think you know are in you. Im excited you're writing again too!
Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-24
This piece is beautiful Britt....
ShootingStar179 ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-28
Aw. Britt. Remember me? This piece is beautiful. So honest and pure. I love it. The last stanza is fabulous with its repetition and bringing everything together.
My Sisters Keeper ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-13
A deeply emotional poem. I don't have any critique or tips on how you can improve this piece. It seems complete, flows well and as I said it is emotional which is the key thing I look for in a poem
5/5
Jenna Davies
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