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Nik ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-18

Radiant lover, protector, mine
You chase away shadows, omens and signs
You fill me with kindness, warmth and of love
You are like an angel, of descent from above

*This was my favorite part. I loved this poem so much. I hardly read or write love poems but this one just makes me smile. I felt so much happiness when I read this. I can really feel how this person makes you feel and that's a wonderful feeling lol. I think you did an amazing job writing this. Very lovely indeed :) Nik*

PinkySwear ( F C D ) at 2009-09-18

I enjoyed this poem from the very first line

My favorite was also the very first stanza. What a perfect picture of the one we love. It couldn't be said any better.

well done
Tricia

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-25

Such a powerful, adorable, inspirational and unique poem. I enjoed everything about it. Well written, 5/5 .Em

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