mandy ( F P C )
at 2009-09-29
That was a really good write. It's hard to face the fact when you must admit that you're to blame or that you wer wrong; and you explained that very well. Wonderul write, Liz, I really liked the way you ended it. 5/5
mandy :)
luv ya, miss ya!
halfwaytoinvisible ( F P C )
at 2009-11-08
Loved this poem. The emotion that is carried through to the end is hard to miss.
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