Nema ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-08
That was good =)
I wouldn't say I'm a fan of the first stanza. But the second and last were better and better!
"Simplify the precious love
Breaking away easy molds"
^
I love! (:
Well done, though I couldn't see the creativity needed in love poems.
Write on!
Ifee ( F C D )
at 2009-10-09
I really like this piece..There isn't exaggeration nor is their too much simplicity thrown in..It is somewhere in the middle but it gets its point across well. Love genre poems sound trite but an experienced writer like you put it in a right way and alos in a way that almost all like it..good write
Kristina ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5
My Sisters Keeper ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-13
I echo what nema said when she said
"That was good =)
I wouldn't say I'm a fan of the first stanza. But the second and last were better and better!"
I felt that this poem was heartfelt and I enjoyed the read.
5/5
I Am Ready To Climb ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-23
This was a gem to read and was not overly expressed, you used simple words and sometimes they can mean the greatest.
A pleasure to come upon your work Britt, God bless!
~MaryAnne
Merry Christmas!
Mimed Lovette ( F C D )
at 2010-01-01
An amazing piece about the love you have always sought after. And I absolutely loved the usage of verbs in this piece. One of the many delightful reads on your site, 5/5!
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