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Once in a Lifetime ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-11

Amazing flow. 5/5
ive done it, im not proud but
i love you use of words sis

Ozzy N Vavy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-11

Thx
i didnt think it was good but i put it up. thx bro

Freedom ( F C D ) at 2009-10-11

I loved this poem :) pls keep writing

ShyandHurt ( P C ) at 2009-10-13

Way to go =) That was an awesome poem that was pretty easy for me to relate to.

And I think it's an awesome poem and it's close to perfect, if not already!

5/5

Ozzy N Vavy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-13

Well thank you. :)

Aaron at 2009-10-17

Nice symmetry. flows really smooth

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