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Genuine Lavender ( F C D ) at 2009-10-12

This is sweet and simple, but I was wondering why you capitalized some of the words randomly, also a little of caring for the punctuation would make it more elegant and easy to read... nonetheless, nice job.

Bianca ( F D ) at 2009-10-19

Beautiful.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-23

Such a sweet poem for I feel a sweet, sweet lady. 5/5, Em

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