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Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-13

Such nice memories and then sadness. Well done.

Countess of Monte Cristo ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-13

Though sad at the end, this was a lovely write indeed. 5/5. Countess..

Quiet Insanity ( F C D ) at 2009-10-13

Nice poem, can see you are going to be a great addition to the club. Nice flow , beautifully done.

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-13

Anthony
Very beautiful. Yet so sad.

The teary-eyed long goodbye
feeling desolate and so alone,
eyes heavy begin to cry.
The moments that we shared.

Love can bring us so much joy. Then can be one of the most painful things we will ever feel.
Good Job!
Take Care
Cindy

DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-19

A beautiful yet sad write... Wonderfully penned. Great job :)

Olwin.

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