Carolina
at 2009-10-15
Wow. i love this.
the last line was so cute, and so true.
i felt this poem. awesome job!
ilikepurple222 ( F P C )
at 2010-01-12
Oh my gosh! i know the feeling so much that it hurts. my favorite line was, "Because as you gradually stopped calling,
I gradually stopped expecting it to be you;
Hope gradually got replaced with logic."
i can completely relate to this at this exact moment! thank you for writing this! :)
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-22
"So when you start to wonder why I don't talk to you anymore,
please believe me when I say It's not that I don't want to...
It's just that I wanted far more than the weather from you..."
What a heartfelt, emotional, but controlled write. You managed to empty your heart on paper with class. I really loved the way you ended the piece. Well done, indeed. Billy Rob
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