Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
This poem touches my heart with the intense passion expressed for a love that seems so possible
I usually prefer happy endings of some sort, but I am left with the hope that your would be lover will not read of your death
Ally ( F C D )
at 2009-10-23
Aw. althoug it had no structure, (and mostly non of mine do either) i loved it. it was sweret. good job!
ally
I Bruise Easily ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-25
I like the last 2 line most out of the whole poem, though ii like reading this i would have threw in more lines, free verse like you. IBE
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