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Ozzy N Vavy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-25

Very cute. i liked it. love is most definate that one desires. great poem. 5/5

*Val

pceluvr4hapenes ( F P C ) at 2009-10-26

Wow that was like amazingly good!
and all soo true, it sucks that its true
but really good poem cristian =)

lisa ( F P C ) at 2009-10-29

Great poem well done

I Wont Let It Kill Me ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-01

Once again, Amazing. 5/5. ~KM~

Jesus M ( C D ) at 2009-11-10

This is impressive for someone your age. Keep at it and you'll be great for sure.

"But their hatred is cold and always flaring"
I really liked the paradox of this line.

5/5

Sumit Ojha ( F C D ) at 2009-11-12

Short and sweet... Nice poem at all... keep up this good work (5/5)

Sumit Ojha ( F C D ) at 2009-11-12

Short and sweet... Nice poem at all... keep up this good work (5/5)

Sumit Ojha ( F C D ) at 2009-11-12

Short and sweet... Nice poem at all... keep up this good work (5/5)

Sumit Ojha ( F C D ) at 2009-11-12

Short and sweet... Nice poem at all... keep up this good work (5/5)

Karl Wild ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-13

Definately something we can't understand and probably never will but we chase after it as if its all that matters. Nice job again 5/5

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