Deana ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
This is really beautiful Jenn, I love the style in which it is written. simplistic and yet complex...very well done!
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Impressive...these short liner really worked for you..the poem has such a soft touch to it and filled with love and devotion the the significant other.
Well done,
5/5 Ingrid
HisNeko ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Wow, this seems like something I would have wrote along time ago. The emotion here is just beautiful, and kinda makes me long to feel again. Wonderfully written.. 5/5
Em ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
Really, really beautiful. Straight to the point but very intriuging (or however u spell it lol). None the less - flawless piece, 5/5. Em
Kristina ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5
~Kristina
Miz Poetic Rymez ( C )
at 2009-11-03
Wow...that was absolutely beautiful!!!
PinkyPrincess ( F C )
at 2009-11-09
Awww... beautiful poem! Great job and congratulations!!! =D
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-11
Congratulations on your win dear :)
Beautifully written indeed, gave me goosebumps :)
Awesome write and congrats once again
all the best and take care
Genuine Lavender ( F C D )
at 2009-11-12
Congratulations, lady.
Those passionate dazzling poems are your speciality no doubt.
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