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Deana ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-10

I really like this, It has a simplistic sound but at the same time it is saying a lot. Sometimes we wish we could just be lost in make believe. An excellent write!

My Sisters Keeper ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-12

I agree with deana but I do feel that personally this poem wasn't as simplistic as she said. I feel the poem had a deeper meaning and by that I mean in actual fact there was a lot of hidden emotion in the poem as well as obviouse feelings.

5/5

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