Comments

EvanescentMoon ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-29

This is a very quote poem...Loved the rhyming and worded humorously..

Genuine Lavender ( F C D ) at 2009-10-29

Good job, Lisa... I would just suggest to remove the un-necessary pronouns (your)s third and fourth lines, believe me it would sound more elegant.

Take care.

lisa ( F P C ) at 2009-10-29

THANKS FOR YOUR GOOD COMMENTS X

DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-30

Woh... A wonderful write about love. Loved the rhyming and the pace of the poem. An very enjoyable read :)

Olwin.

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