Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-31
The Tango is a very sensual dance and you have captured the passion of that dance in your words of love. Well done.
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-31
Mmmhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Nice, Kelleyana!!
The tango is the most passionate dance of all and I feel it should be danced by lovers only..it makes for beautiful firework, ha ha ha..as did this poem you wrote about it:)
A really good read, dear lady!
Je t'embrasse,
5/5 Ingrid
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-31
This was extremely well written with great imagery. You described the tango beautifully...well done. :]
Robert Gardiner ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-31
Wonderful Write Kel, Nicely Done!!!
Kiko ( F C )
at 2009-11-06
That's some kind of a dance you have described. It almost sounds like a mating ritual. Very intense and seductive write!
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Great imagery and flow in this novel approach
I love it
MERCY is never shown ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-07
This was a great write and wonderful to read you really did capture the passion and sexyness of this dance it is a true art of simply human bodies woven together and you captured it all too well great job
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-07
Wow :) what a lovely poem this was. I love the imagery, it's very strong throughout the piece. A very wonderful poem dear. Keep it up. Nik
Lucas Lorenzo The SpanishMystic ( F C D )
at 2009-11-07
Touched with the burning passion, two entities savouring in the lust of wanton sport. Such a sensual affair with deep regards.
Karl Wild ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-19
I think what makes the tango so amazing is that its one of the few dances you can't fake. It takes every part of you to make it beautiful and romantic, just like writing. You can't do it with minimal effort or without your heart or it just isn't the same. This is a great piece and very unique I'm glad I read it 5/5
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