Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
Arouse the desire hidden deep within,
within my lonely soul, waiting for you to light the fire
^^
Your words hit so close to home..
Don't all lonely people yearn to have this, a love that fills our heart and soul?
Very well done on this Loop format, I like Loop poetry very much.
God bless:)
5/5 Ingrid
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
Awesome Sylvia. The Touch :] Each word should be in capitals :]
a very sensual , passionate poem. I loved it
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
This was wonderful, very nicely done. Reminds me of Mel's poem that I just read, they are kind of similar in a way. Well done.
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
Very unique format for me. You really have a great talent and could easily play around with words. Really liked it.
all the best and take care
John Peterson ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
So wonderful..I really loved it!! Such Passion!
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
An awesome poem. Loved it Sylvia. The passion, desire , longing can be felt. You have crafted this piece so well... and did a wonderful job with the loop poetry! Love it :) Well done.
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-11-02
Very nice Sylvia. A really nice format done very well . You created the perfect lovers poem
EvanescentMoon ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-05
You did a fantastic job with that format as well as of sharing your thoughts... I just loved how it rolled off my tongue when I read it out loud..Well done Sylvia..:-)
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
This is the best Loop poetry I've read and
I mean it! It flowed so perfectly with passion
& love. Well done!!
kelleyana ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Sylvia this is absolutely fantastic. No matter what styles of poems you wrote, it's just amazing. I think it's the first time i've seen this style of poem. I like it very much and your words scream love. Very well done, kel.
Paul anand singh ( F C )
at 2009-11-09
To love someone and have that peson return that love is the most exhilerating feeling there is.
That's what my take is on this beautiful piece.
We all need to experience this warmth and loving feeling.
Good job on this piece Sylvia.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...
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