Comments

DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-03

Loved the quote, and your poem. A powerful write that you have so well expressed Walah. Well done.

Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-03

It takes wisdom and strength to arrive at this point and to be able to tell the person. It is a crime against ourselves if we don't. Loved the quote. Well done.

Le Prince de Monte Cristo ( F P C ) at 2009-11-04

I love Toni morrison's quote. You peom is implacable, merciless, unrepentent, yet it moved me because when saying
"I won't spend my precious life crying,
Just for you to notice my tears." you are also tacitely saying that you cry.
Well written, the tempo is matching the meaning, well done 5/5

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-06

A very good poem that fits very nicely with
the quote. There are times where we have to
make the choice before it becomes too late.
Take care..

kelleyana ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-06

I really enjoyed this poem and can relate to it. Very good quote too. It left me thinking. Well done, kel.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-09

Amazing :) 5/5. Em