Linda Leavers ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
This was sad. Good though. Lots of emotion. Very well written, actually. I loved the first third stanza. It was very touching. It makes you feel like personally, you've lost someone you loved. And he loves Zoey and she loves him, and it's a strong bond that you can see between them. It was long, but kept my interest. Some poems would just drone, but this one keeps you wanting to read the next line. One suggestion, the author's note should be at the top, and then you have perfection. I loved this poem. Almost made me cry a little bit.
5/5.
-Linda
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