Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
Olwin, a wonderful poem. You are right, you cannot unlove someone. Well done.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Its difficult to forget or to stop loving someone very easily for they are buried deep
inside our heart..good write :)
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-07
I can relate to this poem, not wanting to let go of someone cause the feelings you have for them will always be what they are. Nothing will ever erase them from your thoughts and never erase them from your heart cause they mean the world to you. Well done Olwin.
Countess of Monte Cristo ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-07
One of the finest I've read by you,Olwin. No kidding.
John Peterson ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-11
I agree with rainbow love sucks!!! But your poem is awesome!!! Well done
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-15
Olwin
What a beautiful poem of love you have penned. It really touches the heart :)
Love Cindy
lostlove1 ( F C D )
at 2009-11-16
A beautiful message here..this is true love! the deepest and truest kind of love..you have captured it in this one. Real love just cant ever stop...no matter what the other person does to you! 5 from me ~Lostlove1~
Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-18
What an elegant poem...I really love this piece...
Grant Gilbert AKA Slash ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-25
How true Olwin a profound love cannot just be disregarded or discontinued when its etched in our hearts forever more.
Well done
Grant
Em ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-29
Wow, this is really good. Once we have loved somebody we can't just "unlove them" as you say. 5/5, Em
Jeff Weiner ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-30
Wow, deep... nicely portrayed, love is so hard to let go if its real. well written
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