Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-11
Sometimes someone we love so much can hurt us but what they mean to us sends us running back to them. I think many could relate to your poem. A great write, relateable & it flowed nicely. Well done.
Classy Girl
at 2009-11-11
I Loved It...Touched me in many ways..=)
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-12
Time heals all hurt but before it does, we do feel like loving that person all over again. The problem is that if it didn't work the first time, it won't work again. You expressed feelings that we all have had about that kind of love if we only admit it. Well done.
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-12
Walah
What a very touching piece. I think once we love someone that love will always be in our heart. WE just sometimes see it isn't the best thing for us.
Excellent Job!
Love Cindy
Em ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-26
This poem shows how much you felt for the person you wrote this about. Sometimes it's better to be friends rather than lovers like in this case as the person hurt you in some way.
"Your love broke me to pieces,
Your love shattered me bad.
But I'd trade everything,
for the moments that we had." My fave stanza. 5/5, Em
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