Decaying In Oceans Of Depression ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-21
This was a really cute love poem, but in the third stanza you might want to change spended to spent. haha. other than that it was a relatively nice poem. 5/5 as well.
another soul wasting this precou ( F C D )
at 2009-11-21
I love this poem it like im reading my life... its awsome ... its like u read my mind thats wat me nd ex were going throught.... wow if u need anything im here hunn.. jst message me... i give it a 5/5
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-26
Despite the grammar errors, I knew exactly what you were saying in this piece & it was again very well expressed. Despite the distance, if it's true love you will do anything for that person & you love them with all your heart & they mean the absolute world to you. What a beautiful write.
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