xViolentKissx ( F D )
at 2009-11-13
Loved it!!(: 5/5
Karl Wild ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-13
I think after we fall in love with somebody even mediocre things about them become spectacular. She has lips just like any other girls and hands and eyes and smile, but what makes it special to you is that its her smile and eyes. great job 5/5
Ash ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-14
This is such an amazing poem. It's simple but at the same time it's this simplicity that captures the readers attention. Every line is so perfect and sweet and fully expresses the way you feel.
Amazing work! Keep it up! 5/5
Jasmine ( F )
at 2009-11-14
I love it
it show so much how u feel and i love that. Its sweet i give it a...10/5 =)
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-17
This well written poem reflects the questions we all ask when we are in love, yet with a personal touch
pceluvr4hapenes ( F P C )
at 2009-11-25
That was soo great!
really great job dude!
its like soo cute and just heart warming :]
Kuro ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-29
Are you the reason
To get up out of bed?
Are you the reason
All my pain has fled?
you have no idea how much i can relate to just this one stanza.
this had a very nice flow and the rhymes were very good. i particilarily like the one about heart-strings.
keep up the good work. this was very romantic.
~Ben
ilikepurple222 ( F P C )
at 2009-12-29
This was BEAUTIFUL!!! i loved it soo much! please read and comment on my "scars" poem? it would mean so much!
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