Comments

Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-16

Hearts holding hands, what a unique image this presents to the reader. Short but sweet, thoughful love poem. Well done.

Quiet Insanity ( F C D ) at 2009-11-16

A different kind of poem for you.
Most are more philosophical but it's good nice to see a different side to Colm :) Good job

Lady Nik ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-16

I like it :) It's very simple which is different for you. I think you expressed your feelings in a very beautigul way and I loved reading this. Lovely words from a sweetheart :) Good work hun. Nik

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-14

Simple but beautiful. A perfect poem, what about 'beautiful tonight' as your title, just a suggestion. Love it, 5/5, Em

Demonic Inferno ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-19

Beautiful written poem filled with emotion and imagery good job