Autumn Breeze ( F C )
at 2009-11-18
Is this a marriage proposal? If so, it's a very romantic way to do so. This was a beautiful verse and I hope, whoever it was intended for, appreciates it.
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-18
I loved to see some Spanish incorporated into this. It was something different and interesting. You used basic words that even people that don't know that much Spanish I'm sure could infer your message. Beautiffully done
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-19
Does Te Amo translate to The Love? This is a lovely love poem. Well done.
Andrea Sunny ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-19
Mercy...this is a romantic piece...it flowed like a sweet slow dance...very nice
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