Comments

Lady Nik ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-21

This sis such a beautiful piece hun. I found such lovely wording in here and it really soothes my heart. Very amazing piece :) Nik

Andrea Sunny ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-21

This is so beautiful...mercy..very touching!!

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-21

Walah
What a lovely poem. To be able to move on with such love still in your heart is wonderful. To forgive someone is actually the best gift you can give yourself. To be able to release the pain allows you to live.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-22

This is a turly, wonderful dedication to your first love, the first loves are always said to stay with us throughout time. 5/5, Em

Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-22

What nice things to wish for a former love. Takes a person who has truly moved on to do this. Well done.

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2009-11-22

Simply beautiful....5/5<3

Autumn Breeze ( F C ) at 2009-11-23

Our first love will always have a little place in our heart and it's nice that they do. I think you are very brave to face this as you have done, I just hope he can do the same. good flow and, although it's a sad verse, I sense that you are ready to move on and put this down to a life experience. Well done.

Faithless ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-23

This is really sweet, I like the whole idea of you forgiving him and wish him all the best even though he had cause you so much pain before.

My favorite lines are:

It is better to have loved you and lost,
Than never to have loved you, my dear.

^^^ I like how you express this, it's just full of sincerity. It's so true what you said, sometimes though things didn't worked out but at least you know , how it feels to once be loved by someone whom you love.

I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Excellent Job